waiting

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Wednesday, 14-Sep-2005 11:52:58

Silent night falls as shadows cast their spirit on the walls. I lie still waiting like many nights before.
Wondering where you are, if you'll call. Wondering why I wait at all. Distant howls call out as if they mourn a dying love reporting to all the pain.
as I lie here in a pretty white wedding gown removing your name. Blood stains the bed. No farewell letter needs to be written, The story is plain to see.
A wife tired of waiting finally sets her self free. Two souls escape that night hers and his for in another part of life a jealous lover is too is tired of waiting.

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 14-Sep-2005 12:06:08

hey that's cool. well done

Post 3 by ^sparky^ (Newborn Zoner) on Wednesday, 14-Sep-2005 22:39:01

Excellent job, Ms. Psycho

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 15-Sep-2005 13:05:22

Hey you stole my fantasy! Hurriedly calls lawyer..smile the imagery is wonderful and you certainly convey the mood..

Post 5 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Thursday, 15-Sep-2005 20:53:26

Lol thank you. Your fantasy? hehe ok. Uh wouldn't share that fantasy with your lawyer smile.

Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Sunday, 18-Sep-2005 9:18:41

I have already but he is a good friend ..smile..

Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Monday, 19-Sep-2005 3:39:52

Hi Maria, I love this poem. Good job.